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I love your latest poem but have to admit (embarassed0 i need some help in reading it to myself.

i have to say poems out loud to understand them best

I am guessing here but the breaks for breath can be made in different places right? or wrong?

It is almost like a dance  as connecting words circle back upon themselves.

I did not study poetry formally past high school so i would like some tips..

this would help me in starting to write again..

great photos and great blog name.

hey thanks!

Finally I did one of your poems again. I messed it up a bit at the end but after having done it 6 times already i thought I would quit when I was ahead.

Hope it is ok.

If it damages it too much I can delete and try again. I will not be offended.

How have you been?  Long time, no speak.

I picked up a copy of your poem and my camera today and went out to read it as a video post. Everytime i tried to get going someone woiould walk near me. I need my own private river.

Yhe other day I saw a hidden courtyard that i might film in. it might even have a bit of an echo.