i luv u,
but ur not mine ne more,
and u never will be again,

why'd u break me when i was already broken,
why'd u let my heart down,
i thought that u were different than all them other guys,
better than them,
i trusted u,
and u let me down,
its been a while since ive smiled,
i keep tellin myself that im not gunna let myself miss u,
but i cant pretend ne more,
i just lay here,
my life is slippin from my veins,
since uve been gone my lifes just been wastin away,
all alone i fall 2 pieces,
i just wish i would wake up from this dream,
and u would be rite here,
rite by my side,
where u use 2 be,
but i no im not sleepin,
its all just a simple wish,
that will never come true,
and i no that my worlds just fallin apart without u,
i just wish i could hear u say those three words,
and kno that u mean it,
i miss u so much,
but u hurt me so bad,
im nuthfin without u,
i luv u, i need u, i miss u,
my heart just wont let me move on..

 
   

 


 
 
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Re: my heart wont let me move on
I think it describes well how you must feel and I can relate. I would advise using proper spelling and punctuation to make your poetry more legible, but that is your choice. From reading some of your poems, it seems you have similiar feelings and might like some of mine, I have posted. Feel free... I wish you well. 

 
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