I thought I already replied to this.. or was about to, probably... i like it, as it is full of emotion and imagery, but again, maybe use of proper spelling might make it more profound. Just a thought. Example: I can't take it anymore, I want to scream. Your choice.

: )... lol ya uve told me this 3 times now.. lol : p
wats up?

do you keep deleting it or something?

noppp... lol

I don't see my reply...

i didnt delete ne of em...

I really don't know then. Oh well.

lol.... ya...