-- nothing and more --

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theracket

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nothing

i've got nothing to say to you
she rumbles

her brown eyes red
with rage
her pale cheeks dark
with disgust

she twists her face away
like a sudden sunset
exhales one huff
like dragon fire
and snaps her gaze back
like a slingshot rubber band

you know why you make me so mad, don't you?
she fumes

her pink lips
a volcano mouth
smoking and steaming
then exploding erupting every
reason feeling thought word lava
snaking slinking slithering spidering
crawling down and down and down
like liquid fingers or claws of burning truth
boring into me your mountainside of the moment.

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grneyedbrunette on

Re: -- nothing and more --

her pink lips
a volcano mouth
smoking and steaming

That's my favorite line. Awesome.

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beti213 on

Re: -- nothing and more --

very cool work... isn't it odd when someone's really mad at you and you feel like you're looking at it from the outside, like here? just a strange experience... well written.