
I really like the first three stanzas but worry about the racist implication of the last two.
Old World monkeys don't use their tales like another appendage... New World monkeys do.
The last stanza needs work.
yeah, but the question would be, "would you eat monkey on a stick"?
BTW What the heck was racist about your poem? I'm on my anti-PC and anti-Post Mod soapbox!
BTW What the heck was racist about your poem? I'm on my anti-PC and anti-Post Mod soapbox!

Nothing was racist about it. Sometimes a cigar is just a cigar Dr. Freud. I suppose you'd have to be familiar with black-faced langurs (AKA Hanuman langurs)... but still... I WAS talking about guava trees.
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