I wish I could climb a guava tree

and sit among its fruit

in the shade of a yellow umbrella

and converse with black-faced langurs.

 

I would do better trying to understand

their tilted heads and curling lips

than beword the thoughts formed

in my own white-faced head.

 

I would hold a guava and recite lines

from Hamlet, so that when these poor langurs

are sat in front of a typewriter for billions of years,

they will sooner complete the works of Shakespeare.

 

I would teach them to use their tails,

show them it is what they do in the New World.
And they will know how to behave

when they discover America.

 

And I would climb down from the guava tree
satisfied with my Promethean evangelism,

with my following of black-faced langurs

disciples ready to do my bidding.

 

-JEBM '08

 
   

 


 
 
misterskank on
Re: Guava Tree
I really like the first three stanzas but worry about the racist implication of the last two.
semiomniscient on
Re: Guava Tree
Old World monkeys don't use their tales like another appendage... New World monkeys do.

 

The last stanza needs work.

culdeedeacon on
Re: Guava Tree
yeah, but the question would be, "would you eat monkey on a stick"?  Smiley

BTW What the heck was racist about your poem? I'm on my anti-PC and anti-Post Mod soapbox!  Smiley
semiomniscient on
Re: Guava Tree
Nothing was racist about it.  Sometimes a cigar is just a cigar Dr. Freud.  I suppose you'd have to be familiar with black-faced langurs (AKA Hanuman langurs)... but still... I WAS talking about guava trees.

 
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