Heck, here's a chorus that I wrote for my new pop punk/hardcore project, Fred Alert.

 

Just trying to get it down on e-paper so I don't forget it.

 

Go ahead, see what you think.

 

 

I'm torn to shreds

I'm ripped to pieces

Like those tiny Reeses

I'm in a hundred multicolored bits

 

I'm rent in three

Like a Blockbuster trilogy

And all I ask is someday

I'll bounce back from this

 

 

(remember, think pop punk; it's a little lighter than it sounds)

 
   

 


 
 
snowboarder on
Re: A Song, Finally?
Sounds like you're describing someones car after they locked a deer inside it. In a good way.
evilbitch2 on
Re: A Song, Finally?
Sounds great dude....i'm in love with it (no really i am)

 

star1464 on
Re: A Song, Finally?
'I'm in a hundred multicolored bits'

confetti!! lol


 
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