Curious glances peer up her thigh like the

quick of a ghost tornado. Her hips arouse

desire and vex enough that he would gladly

exchange a bourbon for a kiss.

 

Her lamp lit so he can see her face ignite his

lust, letting his blood for whores to drink.

He gazes in need through her open robe of gauze,

his entry a non-negotiable brusqueness.

 

Afterwards sweat nourishes a nameless bed,

a wanton shivering in his flesh. The dying strains

of a back door woman taunt him to turn out his

pockets every time.

 

paulygrl ©

 

 

 
   

 


 
 
whitechapel on
Re: Midnight Fix
Mmm...not an impressed guy i'm sure.  I think it's wonderful you've been published.  Do you write short stories or even novels?
paulygrl on
Re: Midnight Fix
yes, I do all the above...poetryt too!

thanks for your visit...

paulygrl 

friarjacques on
Re: Midnight Fix
Thanks for your comments on Toby Wright's poem and my minimalist love metaphor.  It feels good to know that you've touched someone else with a small scrap of words.

 

I particularly like the closing line in this poem of yours.


 
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