Young Love- Nine Times

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nomad

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[young crush, or eyes got it bad] (words by TheRacket) (Image by Nomad. Click on image for slightly larger view.)

i sketch you as your blue

eyes catch the sunlight

i spin before those blue
eyes pin me to the wall

i stumble as your blue
eyes tumble through my secrets

i swear i see your blue
eyes wherever i turn

i stake claim once your blue
eyes take a sudden glance away

i still will love your blue
eyes 'til i close my eyes for good

i sleep and dream
one day i'll see
your blue eyes leap
with joy to see

me

Creativity Exchange again. I know your week just isn't complete without it. This week was a lot of fun. I dare speak for both of us when I say, we hope you like it. Got to TheRacket's page for his side of things.

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perrye on

Re: Young Love- Nine Times

love it!

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nomad on

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Thanks, Perrye. We really do appreciate the feedback. (And our egos love the happy fuzzies, too.)

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perrye on

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I admire both your art and TheRacket's writing. Having them combined is a true treat.

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theracket on

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Four Thumbs Up! (I had to borrow two from a friend. Don't worry - I gave them back.)

Superb work as usual, Nomad. Great stuff! It's no wonder the kid's got Air Supply on repeat in the background.

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Ok, we may wonder for other reasons, but you get the idea.

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nomad on

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ha ha- too funny.

I was playing around with your words in my head. I'm fairly certain you meant "young" as in the age of the crush, not the age of the crusher- but no matter how I wanted to develope another, probably more accurate version for your work I kept coming back to kids experiencing their first "love=crush".