
you know...
you should create a seperate blog for all of these!
and yeah.... have it as a collection on another blog
repost all of the other ones there as seperate entries and then do the new ones there
it can be a place where you tR share?
idk.. just a suggestion!
but i love it!
Still, Mr. Welling is my crush and it would have been nice to see such hotness.
The picture looks like the promise of Spring to me. Cold and dreary enough to shiver, but the sunlight on the whitewashed fence looks like Spring creeping in.
And the different lines. There is an imposition of awkward order. Defined, but not perfect.
I like it.
First of all, I love the picture - the lines, the symmetry... not created by you but captured by you perfectly - it's just magnificent. I wish I had your eye for such things. I normally try to avoid getting power lines in my pictures, and yet... they so perfectly complemented the fence! I would have never thought of taking that picture. I would have turned the other way or aimed differently. Oh, the beautiful picture I would have missed.
Second of all, I'm not sure how the words were writted. Did theracket submit his part and then you decided to add yours or did you plan it that way? Because your infusion worked beautifully. Reading just his words as one, then reading just your words as one, then reading them together as they are as one... it's three different meanings in one as if seducing the reader at different tempos.
You, who were so critical of yourself, missed how incredibly amazing it turned out.
Having said that... I think you are great.
To answer the unspoken question- TheRacket gave me the poem and I responded with the blue words and the image. We don't really discuss our pieces much before we exchange them because we don't want to influence the other; letting the work speak for itself.
Thank you, Laughwithme.
art
but as long as you get to see it!!!