A blogger recently asked me here if I "for once" would do something crative. I think that I did, once, some years back; to wit:
 

When Feeling Up Is No Longer Possible

A warning for those who might blindly wed


The fingers that once brought ecstacy
Once kindled and fired bliss
Now stoke pain
Not cutting like a knife
Still, will leave scars
Though the wounds will never heal
How; why do so many come to this?
Could this dislike, distaste, sheer disdain
Have been born in sexual bliss?
Was this preordained?
Unavoidably destined?
Unalterably required?
To come to this?
No energy left for vehemence
Hate not worth the effort now
Probing fingers, imploring tongue
Cannot give rise to such feelings
Adverse to love
Now that the love has been so long dead

 

David Tecumseh Schmidt

Copyright ©2004 David Tecumseh Schmidt

 
   

 


 
 
commntyblackman on
Re: Does this count for creativity?
This is really good
namastelaoshi on
Thank you, my friend.
Truly, I weep in appreciation.  Namaste, David
nyourfacegrace on
Re: Does this count for creativity?
Very lovely David...you are indeed a talented writer!
swingline45 on
Re: Does this count for creativity?
nice work
wickedwiccan on
Re: Does this count for creativity?
this is great!
namastelaoshi on
Thank you.
Truly, I needed to know this from you at this time.

 

In pursuit of wisdom, truth and peace,  David Tecumseh Schmidt


 
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