OLD DUDE LED BY HIS NOSE


[POETIC WORK IN PROGRESS]


by DAVID TECUMSEH SCHMIDT

nee Carl David Schmidt

DOB: OI311941

200 South Evans Street

Tecumseh, Michigan

AUSPONA


[changed/added @ 09011751]



And so it goes

Her beauty so stunning

Stark innocence

Awed so breathtakingly

In that instant, loins tense, genitals tightened   changed @ 09011717

It curled his toes



Her laughing lilt

By her own accord

Like that of angels

From age thirteen

Peeling from earth

Heaven toward


Anna she is

Not Xiao Xu

Both young and beautiful

At the venue

English Corner

Toward their goal

Being joyfully dutiful



Flitting about

Here for long minutes

Clear in his mind

Anna is her name

Anna is her name

Anna is her name

Forgetting it would be [so] insane   changed @ 1626



Then off they go

Two fledgling university moths

Flit here

Flit there

Tween twixt and twain

Lilting moth-like angels

Sponging new stuff into their brains



Ah but Anna

She is the one

Not more prime [prim]                     Correction @ 1648

Not more proper

In fashion

In donning of clothes

Such of this nothing he knows



It is her face

Out of his mind

He cannot keep He could not keep

Cause that beauty swooped in

With hurricane force

At a distance and [still]only about to meet changed @ 1633

The force of her beauty swept him from his feet



His bent that night

Was ladies only [LADIES ONLY]             changed @ 1737

Males could abide

But should not speak

THE CHALICE AND THE BLADE

[For] Riane Eisler, the author                      changed @ 1739

Praise and great admiration he would offer



It all began well

This new face

With odd edict and intent 09011523 started this poem up from nap 30 min ago 

His English Corner

Being his place

His realm, his space

To pontificate on Eisler's case                     Correction @ 1639



our history our future

Her subtitle

He never did quote

But, still, with seeming authority

About the tome he had with him of which he spoke

Like an impassioned hawker selling a story

Some about may have thought it he wrote


Then dead center

And into his face

Boldly steps hun da

Intent on this flame diminishing

The asshole                     @ 1547 first 640ml bottle LAOSHAN BEER gone.

The pretender is he

Going to dampen then extinguish



When informed of the rule

Found not to his liking

Closer he moved to the flaming tree

Then up it he tried spiking

But a flareup of rage he never perceived

By the pretender to this realm

Was well heard and obvious for any and all to see



The blazing raging tree

Left the venue

Not wanting to witness

The true pretender

As in his pants he did pee

The two angel moths pursued him

Not begging. Just asking “Don't go! Please continue”  

 

                                                         Time check:1615


He stayed

How could it be any other way

Oh my God!”

Oft exclaim younger Chinese

Knowing to say it

They oft are quite pleased

More so he indeed. Enamored, he stayed @ 1651



End of Chapter One: Old Dude Led By His Nose


copyright: David Tecumseh Schmidt 09011659 2009

Room 2 Garden 1

Long Hua {China Dragon} Lu {Street}

Qingdao {Green Island}

China {The Middle Kingdom

 
   

 


 
 

 
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