On an unrelated note Grave Digger is the best monster truck ever.

I like this one a lot.

Especially the intro. VERY interesting concept with the grave digger!

Thank you so much. Not many fully understand or like for that matter that most of my stuff doesn't rhyme. I like to read poetry that rhymes but I can't stand to write it!!

you're welcome! AHahah, poetry doesn't have to rhyme. Awwww. Maybe you will eventually?

we will see, haha. It comes out of me every now and then, no matter how I beat it away.

 

"Back red headed step child. I SAID BACK!!"

 

ahahaha nice.

Unfortunatly the rain doesn't always wash everything away.....

Does it?

 

"Eagle"

"I can feel the rain.

it beats down my wings

slowly making me go insane"

 

It doesn't. That's what I tried to portray in this passage. At least, for me, instead of it washing away everything it allows all of my surroundings to seep into me, swishes it all around and makes old memories surface. ... slowly making me go insane.

 

 Strange enough I don't always know what things mean when I write them out. Not until I go back later and read them does it make sense.

Know that feeling all too well!

 

"Eagle"