Dead Space/Loves Game (Poems)

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lostpoetb24

Just a quick forsight into these two poems..They are 21 lines just like all my other poems but only 2 words in each line. Don't really remember why I wrote them or when but check them out..Please tell me what you think!!!

Dead Space

Loving You

Heart Hurting

Ripped Open

Lost Hopless

Wordless Poem

Blind Deaf

See Speak

Nothing There

Wheres Here

Listen Hear

Dead Fear

Crying Tear

Breathing Air

Lifless Stare

Hope Despair

Want Need

Stone Face

Barron Place

Sickest Taste

Fight Past

Nothing Lasts.

Ross Wigg©

Loves Game

Sorry Friend

Hurt Again

Dont Speak

Already Know

Let Go

Walk Away

Broken Fear

Crying Tears

Trapped Here

Wanting Out

Screaming Shouting

Bleeding Heart

Falling Apart

Not Again

Love Sucks

Say Nothing

Worthless Words

Stupid Girl

Lost Love

Too Much

Shut Up

Ross Wigg©

So yeah again please let me know what you think!! Just wanted to get some thoughts on them and this style

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misterskank on

Re: Dead Space/Loves Game (Poems)

I like 'em.

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blackmamba on

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this writing style is really interesting. its sort of jarring, but it makes the words in each line stand out

btw congrats on the kid. unfortunately this means i need to stop reading your blog because every time i read blogs where people have babies i end up wishing i had a boyfriend and a baby, even if on those blogs its clear that the couple was not ready for the baby and probably should have broken up even before it was conceived (i'm not saying that of you guys at all, but there's a couple of blogs on here)