i'm sorry, i have been busy, i usually read it while i am at work and sometimes i get caught up in something else and i forget to comment. i am enjoying it very much, it is very good.

thank you. I find that I rely on the comments from people to keep me writing. I'm glad you still read though...I should realize that people are sometimes too busy to reply!

Same here.  I've been overloaded with work lately and my computer at home has been on the fritz so I can only check my stuff at work on my breaks.

understandable. like I said to gottaluvme I need to start realizing people's lives aren't as boring as mine! lol! thanks though!

Hi Lemaly. Its my White Pony. I have been overseas and just got back. I am in the Air Force. I LOVE your book. Keep going my friend. I wish I had lived in those days. How about you? Just thought I would say hi and keep up the good work. Your friend White Pony

Hey,

glad you made it back safely! I do absolutely wish I lived in those days. The legend of King Arthur is amazing, I read books about it all the time. It makes me sad looking around the world today, all the vehicles, roads, machinary, pollution...makes me wish I could have seen the world before all this. It would have been beautiful!

 

Thank you for stopping by. I haven't had time to work on the book for a while, but I'm trying! hopefully I'll have a new chapter out soon. Thanks again,

-Lemaly

Just wanted to say HI. Your Knight D.J

My reluctance to give feedback to writer generally stems from past experiences.  With my writers' group, we are professional and upfront about criticism, since all of us are seriously wanting to improve.  Often, online, I find that writers in an informal setting are not seeking feedback as much as they are validation.

If you offer parameters in which you wish comments to be made, it is helpful. 

I critique and edit freelance, so I tend to be, ah, blunt. lol

i will add you as a friend and i will start to read your story