i have just completed my sonnet for english

 

Wedding Day

 

Blesseth art thou, my Queen of Ebony

Oh, how enthralled I still remain

Of how you captured me in your loving grasp, instantly

And yet, you remain more breathtaking than the most elegant crane

For you are as majestic as a black swan

Although dark as midnight, purity is still represented by your gown

For now it is past dawn

So wearing the dress, in the isle, you pace down

Reflections of love shining from our mystic eyes

And I know

You are looking upon your finger where a jewel lies

For oblivion has swept upon you like a crow

 

So, as of today, let us be enchained as one

Until time expires and is forever done

 

By: Kristal St. Jean

Date: April 7, 2008.

 

 

 

(Incase you missed some details, it is from a man's point of view, looking upon his wife on his wedding day, wearing a black dress that even though is the opposite of white, still represents purity and beauty)

 

-:)Kristal:)

 

(P.S. sorry about the messed up colour of the text:|)



 
   

 


 
 
missxmaggiexmay on
Re: Sonnet for english
thats really good
kristalstjean on
Re: Sonnet for english
thanks i belive i got 14.5 out of 18 on it
missxmaggiexmay on
Re: Sonnet for english
i think it deserves way better!
kristalstjean on
Re: Sonnet for english
lol thanks..but its that low because something about imabic pentamiter  (i know for a fact that's spelt incorrectly) being wrong in one of the few first lines
missxmaggiexmay on
Re: Sonnet for english
oh well its still excellent!
kristalstjean on
Re: Sonnet for english
thanks^_^

 
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