If I stand in the middle of a field by a tree;
Thunder, will I hear your wrath's litany
as lightning touches me with death's kiss
Escorting me from this life and it's woes?

Will I fly into peace's oblivion
Sighting the light at the end of a tunnel
Or my body charred just enough
To discern the true extent of hell?

Waking to feel the excruciating torment
In my body, which I have
Experienced in my soul and spirit
Up to now?

Reaping in my body the sins of the father
who, taking his fiendish yearning
for love out on me...
Condemned me to living Hades personified

#

Or is there a loving God?
May I say, "Death, where is thy sting,
Grave where is thy victory?"
As in peace, I walk streets of gold

Upon awakening in the arms
Of true love, without rancor
Or selfish desires
Who has eyes only for me?

Should I sob, bleeding from each pore
In remembrance of wrongs done
Blemishing, scarring innocence;
There is yet hope

For weeping only lasts for the night
But joy comes in the morning
Perhaps, elements of the night
I shan't need you after all.

Shivon May 2009




 
   

 


 
 
blueeyedtawni on
Re: Irony
oohhh   very well written..  i like 
irishlassie on
Re: Irony
Thank youk Tawni!
Truly appreciate your enjoyment and comments!
Must say, I was kinda proud of this one...from darkness to light.
swishersweets on
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Great writing .... !  So glad you are sharing this with us!

Peace.  J.
irishlassie on
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Glad you like; and you know what? I just called "blogging:" Julie...oh dear...still have to get used to everybody...blushing to say the least!
swishersweets on
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lol .... probably did not go over to well right now ....

Peace.  J.
irishlassie on
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Ah, she was very kind about it; seems she knows you, so all is well.  Don't be quite so hard on yourself, my friend.  And what grace said is a good idea...keep writing that journal, and if you don't feel you can put it into a story yourself, I bet someone could co author it with you and do a great job!
swishersweets on
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Oh, she knows me.  I am trying not to be hard on myself .... I really am.  I am going to keep writing the journal ....

Peace.  J.
irishlassie on
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good for you; sis, you truly have not done anything so terrible...everyone dabbles in fantasy from time to time...just have to steer it in the right direction!
swishersweets on
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((((hugs))))

Thanks, Shivon ... I know it will ease in time .... and it gets a little bit better every day.  It is when others won't let you forget that it's hard.  Which is why I truly appreciated your post yesterday.

Peace.  J.
irishlassie on
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Oh; the one about drama?  Thank you very much.  Yes, life is a series of ups and downs, but if we all band together and keep the fingers pointing towards inward change and reflection, instead of judging others all the time, we will be a much happier world and Mindsay community.

Thanks for the hugs...I love em and need em more than you know!

shivon
swishersweets on
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100% agreed ....

Anytime .... I'm full of em ... lol

Peace.  J.
irishlassie on
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AT least one very nice, tight, long bear hug a day then; a standing order!
swishersweets on
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You got it ..... that's a promise .... unless I'm at the river .... lol

Peace.  J.
irishlassie on
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You don't take a laptop along with you?

PB annd J sandwich for you, Jewels
Peace, Blessings and Joy!
swishersweets on
Re: Irony
I take the laptop because I can journal on it .... as long as there is gas in the generator.  No internet .... no running water .... well, the river, but that doesn't count.  Baths in the river .... or heat water on the stove.  Porta potty or in the woods, whichever you prefer .... no phones/cell phones ..... nothing.

lol ..... I love that PB & J ..... back at you, girl.

Peace.  J.
irishlassie on
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Thank you, and same to you...talk about primitive...but you say you go back and forth quite a bit?
swishersweets on
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It is an hour and a half from our home .... the reason my dad retired here ... to be closer to his paradise.  :-)

Peace.  J.
irishlassie on
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Well, that's quite a way to be flitting back and forth very often, so I guess you don't do that...just when you need supplies and so on, I guess....
swishersweets on
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We are usually in five days and out two .... or in six and out one .... depends on how much laundry I have and how much needs to be done around here.  It also depends on the friend who watches mom and the property for us .... sometimes his schedule requires us to be home a few days longer than we would like ... but we are very thankful to have him and are happy to oblige.

Peace.  J.
irishlassie on
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Aw; well, I know it must be a great break for you, then, from the slog of every day life, even though you love your mom and all that...we all need a break!
swishersweets on
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It is a good break for us .... lol

I think mom actually kind of enjoys it too, though .... she can eat all the sweets she wants and get away with it.  lol

Peace.  J.
irishlassie on
Re: Irony
giggle...sounds something like me...I am diabetic and usually stay away from them, but you know how it is, some days...
swishersweets on
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Unfortunately I do .... lmao .... me and sweets .... not a good combo ...

Peace.  J.

You take care of yourself girl ...

(((((BIG HUGS))))

Peace.  J.
irishlassie on
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mmm mmm mmm....huge hugs back atcha!
I had some jelly babies today...nice little treat!
swishersweets on
Re: Irony
I just had a piece of strawberry pie ..... it was yummy!

Peace.  J.
irishlassie on
Re: Irony
I've had fresh strawberries, cut and sprinkled with splenda, but not the pie yet...had watermelon, tangerines, pears and a mango, and bananas too...but no pie...gotta get in my little buggy and go share some of yours!
swishersweets on
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Ok, I'll share my pie .... but you gotta share the mangos, pears and tangerines!  Bring that buggy on over.

Peace.  J.
irishlassie on
Re: Irony
On the way; I often make fruit salad in the summer...add grapes, kiwis, apples, peaches, pineapple, strawberries, and a bit of orange juice, and voila! I don't actually put pears in there though. I eat them separately!
swishersweets on
Re: Irony
Love fruit salads .... love fruit ....

Hurry up .... would ya?

Peace.  J.
irishlassie on
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kay kay!
blogging on
Re: Irony
Oh Julie...I have nothing against you. I think you are cool. 

I had gotten pretty jealous of Ms. Harley. You did an awesome job. Don't do it again but I think you have hidden capacities and talents that you weren't even aware of. (((((Jules))))) 
irishlassie on
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And I certainly agree with Jill there, Jewels!
You are one heck of a woman, with all you have to deal with; but I also know loneliness when I see it.  If you would write about this person you want to be, the adventures you want to go on, as a younger lady, still vivacious, even red headed, for Christ's sake! You would have many many great days, filled with fantasy and adventure, through your characters!
swishersweets on
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Okay .... that did it .... *cries like a freaking baby*

You got a deal, girl.  Sounds like a plan.  It would be fun to do .... with your help and support.  I am not remotely close to being a writer ....

BTW .... I love the Jewels .... my email is justjewels57 .... :-)

Peace.  J.
irishlassie on
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I will read and edit anything you write, girlie...unless it comes in so fast that I can't handle it! But I know you and I are going to be published, and don't you doubt it!

I thought you were giving me your email, but I see you just wanted me to see it has jewels in it...but if you do want me to have it, then at where.com?

And I am learning to love my jewels as well!
swishersweets on
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Thank you so much .... don't think you will have to worry about an over abundance at once .. lol.  You are an amazing gift to me right now .... I appreciate all the confidence.

lmao ... justjewels57@yahoo.com  ..... it's all yours.

((((big hugs)))) That goes two ways, for sure!

Peace.  J.
swishersweets on
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((((Jill))))

I am trying really hard not to cry here.  No way in hell would I do anything like that again. 

I hope you will let me add you to swishersweets network ... I'd love to have you back.

Peace.  J.
blogging on
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Of course. Peace J. 
swishersweets on
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Thanks, Jill. 

:-)

Peace.  J.
farrohcious on
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Now that's beautiful poetry.  Thank you so much for sharing.
irishlassie on
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And THANK YOU for visiting, reading and such a nice compliment! 
kyrairis on
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I agree with everyone here - this is beautifully written! You just have a way of expression emotion that makes the reader feel what you're writing instead of just reading it. Good work!
irishlassie on
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Oh thank you, Kyra; great compliment! I try to put myself into the speaker's shoes, as in a story or a play and to feel the emotions they feel, relaying them to the reader through my poetry.  Glad that it seems to be working!

I think I'll keep you around, for a compliment a day.  Mutual admiration society is a good thing...so join the club!
soysin on
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inner battle? I love the feeling I'm getting from this. it helps me step out of my own shell and look within. thank you
irishlassie on
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thank you so much, soysin; glad you liked it! love it when i make my readers think 
you are welcome!

 
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