She held the drink her right hand, letting her long dress sift through her other hand's fingers.

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Once, in reality she smiled to herself and, glowing, her white teeth shone through the mirror towards the window, hitting the water outside with a Mediterranean force. An orange on the table. They wanted the Shakespeare by her bed: a large ring of dust had settled near the binding. It wasn't their decision to step around the clothing, their dirty shoes rubbing grime into the silky cloth, tearing the thin pieces. She grabbed one of his hands and held on for support, words blowing like wind around her ears.

 
   

 


 
 
eyesthebye on
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IN  your earlier blog you said you felt like a hermit. If being a hermit produces as good a writing as this piece then it is worth being a hermit.

 

By the way you have a good name. if you dont mind me saying so you do have a very kind and loving face.

FamousLovely on
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Thank you so much for all the compliments, I'm haven't actually worked hard enough to deserve them. Lol Thanks also for coming to visit my blog--means a lot!
eyesthebye on
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I  didnt want to seem like a dirty old man but your face is so much like your writing.

I am sure glad you are a good writer lol

 

My face is like my typing. Things are in th wrong places but they are creative.

 

Could I be added to your list and I would like you to be added to mine.

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Of course I added you (how could I not, when I, as a woman, live for the compliments that make me blush!), and as nice as I loved to be complimented on my face, it's the compliments on my writing that make me smile the brightest. My biggest flaw is that I lapse into writing randomly--I don't take it as seriously as I should. Reading classical literature is my one true love.

 

Lol I love "My face is like my typing." And don't worry, just because you give me compliments doesn't mean you're a dirty old man. Thanks again for visiting--writing compliments make my day.

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I look forward to more talks.

 

I am sure you have something planned but if not tommorrow night at 9pm est. I have no idea where you are some of us are gathering just by coming to my blog and using it like messaging. itb would be nice if we all had the same messaging but we dont so we are experimaneing with a New years Eve party.  I will probably have peopl ask a questioin anbd then we will answer it in turnbs and see how the converstain goes. Next week we will look at what happens and try it again.

FamousLovely on
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Sounds good! If I'm around I'll definitely join in. I'm pretty sick so I can't sleep or go out with my friends (except my boys did bring me some soup today).....I'd love to join in.

eyesthebye on
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Oh dear what is the problem if you dont mind me asking.
FamousLovely on
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Cold with watery eyes and a headache. All the good stuff. Been taking Vitamin C by the pound.
eyesthebye on
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Your pee must glow orange in the dark then. Do youy have to wear sunglkasses or a welders mask in the toilet.
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Lol No though I did want some ambien for the sleep....

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i love your poetry

longwayhome on
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I really like this.  Could be my vivid imagination, but in just those few words, I was there and even let the story continue in my head.  Then, I snapped back to reality and was still in my dark living room.

Wish there were more like you around Mindsay!
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Thank you for the compliments!
eyesthebye on
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How was your day.

 

I gave the assignment you  gave to us last night to a few people I wrote to today. they are also going to look you and Sweetbriar up. They plan to do blogs on your assignment to list their inspiratioins. they will let you and me know when they do that.

 

You were alot of help last night. With your questions it allowed me to be host and took away some pressure. I see now that these things can only handle 3 or 4 at a time or it gets confusing after 90 min when the threads go everywhere.  We can have more under specific topics. it would be fun to do one with you and sweetbriar sometime on writing..

 

Hope things are well with you.

 

When I face my cranky supervisoir tommorrow i will try and think of your smile.

 

Sweetbriar and i had a great talk today. you can find it in the responses to her third blog.

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Oh, you've met her then? Wonderful! She and I have been talking on AIM and have gotten to know each other quite well. She is a very spectacular woman. I think it would be great fun if the two of us spoke on writing a bit....I'm glad I was some help last night, I had never done a Mindsay party before, but I had super fun!
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Thanks for the contact you made for me. Her and hit it off immediatly. She has quite th mind and personality.

I didnt see a picture maybe she smiles like you.

 

To my knowledge I only know of two mindsay parties and you were at the only one where anyone more than one person showed up. I sent your assignment out to my friends and several are respoonding. I forget the title of it now but checky out the one post by www.underground1986@mindsay.com . She says your name is on her list so you will probably hear from her. I am about to leave for work right now so i cant look the title of it up.

 

Have a good day Ray


 
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