i just wrote this at skool today...whatcha think?


My thoughts of You!...
As i lay here in the darkness
my skin pressed against yours,
I can feel that you love me
and theres nothing i need more.

I've made mistakes in my past
thats true...
but nothing else matters
since i found you

if i could turn back time
and undo all my regrets,
if only there was something,
to make me completley forget..

But ive learnt from my past
and now i am hear
im loving you insanley
and theres nothing for you to fear!

i wish i could show you
just what im feel
how can i explain to you
that i know this is real?

Everytime i look at you
i almost cant believe
that i could be so lucky
and that this isnt just a dream.

your absolutley beautiful
in everything you do,
and i feel like a goddess
when im alone with you.

when you touch my body
and softly kiss my lips
i feel a passion so intense
not one moment i want to miss


how can i show you
that your everything to me?
how can i be
everything that you need?

baby just know
your ALL that i see
your everything ive ever imagined
and your everything i need!





kinda chezzy eh? haha

 
   

 


 
 
blueeyedtawni on
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no cheezy..

 meh likes...

 its speaks  from  the soul..

 i feel  so much within the  words....

ravenous73 on
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good poem, i have a hard time writing poems about love, its one of the strongest feeling of the human soul that can never seem to be controled lol

 
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