I hold these truths to be self-evident, for myself and the gender to which I owe my creativity and life:
That my body, my cunt, my mind, and my spirit belongs to me, and me alone;
That my sisters’ bodies, my sisters’ cunts, my sisters’ minds, and my sisters’ spirits belong to them, and them alone;
That I will fight like a motorcycle-riding, cigarette-smoking, foul-mouthed, strong-willed, anti-authoritarian badass from hell’s bowels to protect those (TRULY) inalienable rights in any way possible;
That I do what I can to protect other women from such tortures that include (but certainly are not limited to) rape, molestation, degradation, hatred, discrimination, genital mutilation, body-hatred and overall patriarchal shittiness;
That I show strength yet tenderness and compassion in all aforesaid endeavors;
That most of all, I do these things out of love, love for not only women but the living world in its entirety:
    Love of cows, chickens, grass, goats, trees, children, (men too!), mountains, rocks, birds, the moon, rivers,     salmon, the self, creativity, experience, learning, awe, the creator, the creation, bubbles, dreams, the moon.
That I never lose my love of the creation;
That I never adapt to a world of the Destroyer, the plastic, the corporation, the fakeness, the indifference;
That I will never accept apathy;
That I HAVE the fucking right to learn science without mutilating the creatures I so dearly love;
That I HAVE the fucking right to cry in public without trying to hide it;
That my sisters HAVE the right to not hate themselves for who they naturally are!
That, most of all, I fight so can live in a world where:
    We love.
    We fart in public.
    We’re not disgusted by our blood.
    We’re not afraid to go out after dark just because we have cunts.
    We don’t dissect cats, pregnant or otherwise.
    We can kiss girls too, if we want to.
    We can embrace masturbation.
    Men don’t rape women and get away with it.
    We can go into an old growth forest and not hear airplanes overhead.
    We
    Can
    Be:
    Safe, loved, lovers, naturalists
    ...Ourselves.

It can happen.
And it will, once we stand up for what we know is dying. The world, the child’s soul, the woman’s body.
Friends, sisters, brothers too,
it can happen.
 
   

 


 
 
bandgeek24 on
Re: A Declaration of My Sentiments
i like it.

 

psuche on
Re: A Declaration of My Sentiments
This is actually pretty good.  Better than pretty good, actually--its quite well written.  One simple change could move it from there to Excellent.  Do you know what it is?
craziecookie on
Re: A Declaration of My Sentiments
No, tell me!
psuche on
Re: A Declaration of My Sentiments
OK, but I think you'll not like it.  Your phrasing is good.  And its obvious you have something you want to say with some passion.  Those two traits will take you a ways. But the unrelenting use of the expletives shows a lack of sensitivity, and probably a deficient vocabulary.  You will turn off more readers than you will turn on. 

Your vocabulary can be increased easily.  Do a search on it and you will find some help.  Sensitivity is another matter.  You can develop that only if you want to, and wanting it is almost tantamount to having it.  Of course, if you are only interested in reaching a readership that tolerates, or even like the profanity, then by all means keep it up!

finally, I offered this brief critique in the spirit of kindly helpfulness.  I hope you will accept it as such.  I mean no offense.
silvara7 on
Re: A Declaration of My Sentiments
Fantastic!!!

 
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