Wow You know you got some real talen for this, have you ever thought publishing any? I think you would have a strong change to win....I thought I liked this one, but I like them both....honestly I like them both....this would be an awesome poem for those whom have been in a bad realationship and then started something new, something that could be promissing but yet they are afaird to venture into it for the fear that they will ended up hurt like the last time, or like in the past they will hurt the person whom tries to express love to them..Keep up the awesome work!!

ViolentMadrox

wow... spot on... anywhoo... thanx for thinking that its good... i try ... but i am never sure how well i did till some one says so... thank you so very much for replying!!!