
Bonnie...This is simply beautiful...
dancing your way into life...everlasting.
Thank you for responding so fast, my friend. Did you find it too long, or boring? I just did not know how tomake it shorter.
Bonnie,
Your depiction of life on the dark side made me cringe...that's a good thing...this story is meant to produce a strong reaction...it takes talent to pull it off..
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Oh, thank you so much; that is high praise coming from you, dear! I appreciate your comment and so glad you liked it!
I like it, Bonnie. And so happy to know that this artistic expression has been restarted in your life!
Thank you so much; I absolutely love writing of any kind, poetry being a part of it, when I am inspired. These challenges just give me a little push in the right direction. Glad you liked it. I read it to the church tonight, and I could just tell by their expressions and the stillness that comes after the reading, that I had captured their attention and that they liked it. Then the pastor said I have waited far too long to try to get my work published.
I think this is the best of yours I have read. Here's a secret: I actually love rhyming poetry -- if it's as good as this one.
Thank you so much Cas. You don't know how much this compliment means to me. I did feel especially inspired when I wrote this one. Came easily.
I love that it seems singable, and it does seem like one that would have to come naturally to fit so perfect. The first two stanzas are gold; they set up the entire poem perfectly.
Wow; someone else actually said that it sounds like a song...but I thought it was probably too long...but I may see if someone can do music to it someday.
I actually went back and read it in the face of such praise, my dear. Thanks again; I know my calling is to write..i just need to send it to publishers...have just lagged in doing it.
I actually went back and read it in the face of such praise, my dear. Thanks again; I know my calling is to write..i just need to send it to publishers...have just lagged in doing it.
I know the feeling. I write so much, and by the time I am feeling up to sending in my ideas and works, I feel like I've got nothing -- I immediately create a block. Ever wonder what happens when an unstoppable force hits an unmovable object? That's what I feel like right now. 

Oh, that is the manic depressive in you; it is exactly how i feel all the time, and why I mess everything up for myself....just push through, dear, just keep pushing until the wall comes down...like that youtube lecture told us...by the way; i had heard it once, but I listened again; love it.
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