this is a school assignment. i really like it. my english teacher complimented me on it. ^_^

I am worrisome and silent

I wonder why I sit here

I hear myself screaming

I see myself dying

I want to take away the pain

I am worrisome and silent

 

I pretend I am a good girl

I feel that I really am, but won’t admit it

I touch your face

I worry that I’ll never see you again

I cry because I fear I’m right

I am worrisome and silent

 

I understand love and the pain it holds

I say, “I love you,” because it will always be true

I dream of being far away to stop the pain

I try to make things ok, but it never works

I hope that someday things will be

I am worrisome and silent

 
   

 


 
 
beti213 on
Re: *I am*
This is beautiful. Usually starting every line of a poem with "I" gets stagnant, but this is far from it! No wonder your english teacher was impressed-I am too!
blind on
Re: *I am*
oh, thank you so much.
itwasonlyakiss on
Re: *I am*
^_^ i had to do a poem liek that...we called it an "i-am" poem, they rock my socks

i REALLY like yours tho, its better than what mine was lol

blind on
Re: *I am*
lol thanks. it's all a matter of mindset. my mindset is depressed and self destructive, to a point. it equals interesting writng. lol

 
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