This poem was written for the 18th and 19th PoetryChallenge (Forgiveness and Self respectivly) I am fairly happy with it all considered.

It is about just how difficult it is to forgive yourself for the faults that you perceive in yourself.

Anyway. Enjoy.

To Forgive the Self:


The young man hangs his head,
And wonders where he erred,
All alone his heart had bled,
And his voice was never heard,
He walowed in self-hate,
And he had no self-esteem,
His pain would not abate,
Until he died it seems,
Each night was filled with tears,
As he layed awake and cried,
Seeking to forgive his fears,
But he failed each time he tried,
But to end of days his self was marred,
Though to forgive he fought so hard.
 
   

 


 
 

 
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Re: THAT LUCKY OLD SUN - Ah, sometimes I'm dense - just saw who this was for, J...scuse me...((((hugs))) A.

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