I know I said I'd be posting here an there but it has become so much harder to sit down and write something... For those of you that don't know, I've recently just picked up a second job because of personal/family reasons. I'm also going to school full time right now and trying my best to past my classes, even though I'm hella lazy and I believe I'm not going to do my homework, I try anyway.

Here is something that I wrote for class... it isn't that long, again sorry.

Homeless and Blind

Silience fills the cold dead air
At what we used to stare
The conflict inside their mind
We did not see and could not bind,
whole hearted dreams to a ravished broken reality
We could not get out of that mentality
of me, me, me, me, me.

We see them litter the ground in Paris, France
From there all the way to the United States
This dream state is but a trance
To the hungry as they sit and wait
Being denied their meal they perish
Over time their numbers begin to vanish
Yet they increase, due to the fact that we can't see
That everything's become about, money, money, money.

We fight for ourselves and defend our vanity
Until it escalates into an unforgiven calamity
A slap to the face and still we will not wake
To rescue others from their dying fate
Over time we lose obligations and ability
To control this forsaken thing called superficiality.
 
   

 


 
 
irockmysocks on
Re: Sorry Please forgive me! Homeless and blind!
u wrote that? whoa.
Unitedybevol on
Re: Sorry Please forgive me! Homeless and blind!
Mhm. Is that whoa a bad thing O_O.
irockmysocks on
Re: Sorry Please forgive me! Homeless and blind!
oh no..lol..that was a good type of whoa.
Unitedybevol on
Re: Sorry Please forgive me! Homeless and blind!
lol okay, that's good then. there's a bunch of other cwap on here ^_^.
boyontherun on
Re: Sorry Please forgive me! Homeless and blind!
nice poem mate... ur good with words..  Keep it up..

 

on my end.. I feel like shit,,, im glad one of us is in an okay mood... sorry about your extra job you have to pick up.

Unitedybevol on
Re: Sorry Please forgive me! Homeless and blind!
^-^ Thank you.

Why like shit? I'm not feeling that great either...

It's fine, a job's a job.
boyontherun on
Re: Sorry Please forgive me! Homeless and blind!
Just had some bad shit go down is all.  I'll be fine.. Yah.. jobs are jobs... not that I have had much experience.
Unitedybevol on
Re: Sorry Please forgive me! Homeless and blind!
Eek. Well that's good. I'm here if you wanna say something.

lol, for my age I think I have somewhat above average experiance.
boyontherun on
Re: Sorry Please forgive me! Homeless and blind!
thanks dude... lol you're a funny guy.. you rock the world.. 
Unitedybevol on
Re: Sorry Please forgive me! Homeless and blind!
your welcome. Nah, I leave that to the comedians, that are actually funny.
bizarrolisa on
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I love Nebulas, your header picture is beautiful. Enjoyed the poem, I actually just posted one on my page as well. 
Unitedybevol on
Re: Sorry Please forgive me! Homeless and blind!
I love em too! =P thank you. ^^, I will check it out an comment.

 
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