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I sense some insecurity in yourself as a female...You feel as if you need someone to, not watch your steps, but try and influence them as you go along a rough path. It will smooth out. Blessed Be.
That seems correct to me.. And ...blessed be?
=)
what is blessed be?
Is a good omen of the Old Faith....If you'd want to say Wiccan ot pagan.
Ok...I don't know what to say. What does it mean?
I'm not going to lie, I don't quite understand it either, but that's part of what makes poetry so ... versatile. You can say almost anything and have it mean something to someone. You may not even know yourself what it means until you think about it afterward.
It's very good, though I'm no expert on poetry. I liked it. It's one you have to read through twice at least to get ideas about. Very good. (encourages!)
True, some of the nicest poems are not quite understandable. Thanks for the truth
I'd rather hear that someone truthfully didnt like my poem, then hear that they lied to me when they said they did. Glad you liked it.
I'd rather hear that someone truthfully didnt like my poem, then hear that they lied to me when they said they did. Glad you liked it.
I like the "candles" part. very much.
I think you should think about what candles mean to you (poetically) and write about that. There is a lot to play with there.
--Dobie
hmm.. I'll think about that... thanks
k
thanks.
I htink this poem has a lot of feeling, but it seems a little 'scattered'. What do you mean 'I try to be healthy? is it something like; you eat right and someone doesn't or emotionally healthy?
Hmm...all of them, I think. I was looking down at myself and I was looking at my scars, and my stomach, and feeling sad, I try so hard to get better. I know eating healthy and excersicing makes me happier, but I often give in the the unhealthy food that my mom buys and that I'm not allowed outside to excercise, and often forget... I just feel unhealthy...and it's my own fault. It seems smtg like that, s I said I havnt been able to understand my poetry lately...
as i read it again.. when i say" I said I'd never be one of them" I guess it could mean addiction, stupid, and then about the encouragement, mom nore anyone really encourages me to eat healthy, or cares. If I didn't ask my mom to buy healthy food, she wouldn't and I'd be overweight. I think it's mixed...
I love literature, and poetry.
Here is something I would like to share with you:
Mosaic
a series of notes, prose-poems
stories, bits of play & dialog
Aphorisms, epigrams, essays
Poems? Sure
A nice copy of James Douglas Morrison, a besutiful Dionysian writer...I am a fan. I'm posting the written copy on my blog.
Cool. I'll check it out.
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